The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph below represents the percentage of the older people aged 65 and above in three various countries between 1940 and 2040.
From the general perspective, it was observed that Japan has the lowest population in 1940 but by 2040 it stood in the top of the list. In the meanwhile, USA was found to occupy the highest place with large group of aged people in 1940 which declined its growth by 2040 in comparison to other countries.
It can be viewed from the line graph that, there are many fluctuations in every country except for Japan where there was dramatic increase in older people in 2030 from 10% to 25% and then it slightly tapered off. Considering, Sweden there were many raises and drops but were of least variation. In 1940, there were 7% of older people in Sweden and reached to 25% by 2040 with slight elevations in 1980 and 2010. Taking USA in to consideration, there was minor increase in the first two decades then the graph raised from 10% to 15% gradually and for certain period that is 1980 to 2020, it maintained a plateau state and reached to approximately 25% by the end of 2040.
In conclusion, there were many fluctuations in the trajectory of all the countries and also a gradual and sudden increases were observed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the least'.
Suggestion: of the least
...ere were many raises and drops but were of least variation. In 1940, there were 7% of ol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, while, except for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65765765766 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55172924366 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6658095922 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207243213601 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100505262094 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117697053828 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156607393615 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146008732478 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.