Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
People looking for better opportunities of their growth emigrate from their native places and settle down in another country or region. This has led to increase the globalization affect all over the world. Some people digests this fact while few people cannot and claims that the impact of this effect is not beneficiary. To major extent, globalization have tend to pose a positive development but, it too has some flaws.
Rural people shifts to urban areas for better job opportunities and further career growth. Immigrants have always played a major role in increasing the economy of the destined country as their potential and intellectual pays higher earnings to the country. For example, many young engineers from various countries migrate to the United States contributing their minds to increase their financial earnings and also get paid a huge amount of money. Furthermore, immigration has led people to interact with different cultures and tradition which unite for peace all over the world.
In the contrast, immigrant people are stealing all job opportunities as well as other amenities from the local people of a country. The benefits of civilians are getting far away from their reaching the outsiders. In addition, there have been many cultural differences between people which has led to many repercussions such as crimes, racism and many more, The development of a country gets hindered due to these reasons.
To conclude, one needs to unite with all people eschewing their cultural and personal differences to work efficiently for the country's development. Citizens and immigrants both should be given equal opportunities to work for their personal growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ry. To major extent, globalization have tend to pose a positive development but, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33082706767 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82595762882 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.097071563 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132985831256 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588844936798 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666057187698 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899872506187 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899908491983 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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