Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are the role models for many youngsters. Do you agree/ Disagree?
Recent days, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trends to see prodigies discussing the topic of celebrities being role models for many, especially young generation. While few people believe that youngsters are blind followers of these celebrities, others completely despise it. This essay will prudently persuade how popular stars are the role models for young people these days.
To commence with, the fans of the famous people simply follow their footprints carelessly, without giving a second thought whether what they are doing is right or wrong. More specifically, these fans try hard to get all the bling such as cars, accessories, phones, clothes etcetera, what these celebrities possess. To achieve all this, many times they indulge in criminal activities, ruining their lives. For example, many teenagers, when see their favourite TV icons in zero figure, in the zeal to have same physique, they go beyond their limits and start doing regress exercise without proper guidance, thereby, deteriorating their health. Seen in this light, we can say that the sportsmen and film stars are idol for their fans.
Another insight that must not be neglected, meanwhile, is the social media. In other words, in the contemporary world, everyone is available on social media including, stars and common man. The popularity of players and film stars become more evident, when we see their fan following on social media sites namely facebook, twitter and so forth. Therefore, consistent with this line of thinking, it is undeniable that celebrities have a strong grip on adolescents.
In conclusion, I radically feel and believe that people are mad for sports and film stars. However, I would suggest that it is good to have an idol, but following him without reason is not good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20415224913 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63631944085 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4356054775 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186770083305 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620593123596 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061972817182 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104574091033 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273640851619 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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