Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them?
Tourism is indeed play important role for any country's economy. However, increasing tourism have negative repercussions as well. There are some significant causes of increasing number of tourism. In order to combat the effects, possible solutions should be in place.
The first cause is greater number of pollution rises. Tourism means more people visiting another country which in turn means producing more unhealthy environment. For example, last year I visited Turkey. I and my spouse traveled most of the cities through ferries. During our journey, we encountered polluted water which was causing due to CO2 emission releasing from the ferries. These pollution is greatly affecting marine lives. Most of them could not survive because the water life is almost become impossible. In addition to the above effect, many tourist countries are now in a danger of flooding. For example, Ice in Antarctica is melting faster than ever before. This melting ice allowing water to flow down across the various countries and become causes of floods and hurricanes. This will cause loss of many lives and casualties. According to the recent fact, Thailand has shut down one of its Island for the visitors due to increasing threat of flood. If the pace of visitors stay steady, the impact on environment would have more adverse effect.
In order to mitigate the impacts on environment, reasonable steps need to be taken. First, there should be some rules from the Government end for visitors to abide by the law. Violators need to be dealt strictly. Second, Tourists should be encouraged to walk rather preferring bikes, ferries or any other mode of transport which requires fossil fuels. By doing this, less pollution will be produced hence would have less impact on the environment.
In conclusion, tourism affecting the environment as a whole but the point of concern is whether any country like Thailand and Turkey could stop people from visiting which is one of the main source of their income. I think, the more convenient way is to educate people rather refrain them visiting other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
Tourism is indeed play important role for any countrys economy...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pollution' or 'These pollutions'?
Suggestion: This pollution; These pollutions
...O2 emission releasing from the ferries. These pollution is greatly affecting marine lives. Most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16129032258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60502018231 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589442815249 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5416204217 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2083333333 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145078186008 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420408930688 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383341702703 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08559400775 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317165496653 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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