Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In this era of technological advancement, people are impressed from influencers of social media with their luxury items and lifestyles and try to copy them, which cause them a huge amount of debt by buying unnecessary expensive items. There are numerous reasons for this which I will analyse in this essay and will generate solutions to tackle this problem.
One of the reason, people especially youngsters use social media excessively which is easy to access. They impressed from celebreties and influencers of YouTube and Instagram and try to live like them, buy unnecessary expensive products. Probably, they find sense of fullfilment and satisfy themselves by such expensive life style but unfortunately end up with heavey debts.
Furthermore, there are people who compete with their friends to upload pictures with luxury items to show off and many of their friends get jealous, or try to nut these kind of products for themselves too. Another particular reason is, some people are addicted to luxury lifestyles such as cars, watches, jewellery or technology such as smartphones, laptops and so on which they change every year. For example, my brother’s friend is not so rich but every year he buy smartphone or went to expensive hotels and purchase new cars after 2,3 years. He is now in a heavey debt which he have to pay within a year.
A solution to this is, people need to have a good advice from elders, or good friend circle to learn new productive things from friends instead of competing with them. Moreover, parents should protect their childerns from bad influences and excessive use of internet and teach them from the beginning how to buy things which they really need.
In conclusion, I believe, after implication of the afortmention solution, many people can tackle from the debts which cause them with their own impulsive conducts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'buys'.
Suggestion: buys
...friend is not so rich but every year he buy smartphone or went to expensive hotels ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good advice'.
Suggestion: good advice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09771986971 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75345855636 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7241545476 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25597696112 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929531217876 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044210025446 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143621076091 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406062463371 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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