Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?
It is often said that raising public funds for charity plays a vitally important role in helping the poor nowadays. It is believed that every member of society needs to send a certain donation to charity organizations. Personally, I completely agree with this statement, and I will explain why in this essay.
It seems that charitable donations can help the community in some respects. Firstly, poor children may have more opportunities to go to schools thanks to financial supports from public donations. Examples can be seen in many far-flung regions in Vietnam, where kids are able to study in public schools without worrying about tuition fees. In fact, this could result in them receiving better education, thus having brighter career prospects. Secondly, it is a widely-observed fact that many patients who live in severe poverty are suffering chronic diseases due to the scarcity of finance. This may be well lessened by receiving donations from other citizens, meaning that the such sick peoples’ possibility of recovering from illnesses tends be increased.
It would appear that making donations may encourage residents to cultivate their civic sense. By this we mean that by supporting the poor financially, numerous people tend to have more sense of responsibility, as they have to save more. Indeed, this can enable many folks to spend their money more meaningfully, thereby enhancing their overall well-being. Another positive factor would be that many city dwellers will either learn or improve their money management if they have to spend less. It appears that thanks to this, people may be equipped with right skills to avoid financial crisis later on.
In conclusion, it seems to me that giving a certain amount of salary to charity could provide people and society with many benefits, ranging from helping poor children and patients to improving a feeling of well-being, and enhancing residents’ financial management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'school'.
Suggestion: school
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87121958898 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.118904636 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122740114787 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428154786667 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026578818735 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690865236013 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032130761985 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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