Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
-Explain why you are writing
-Describe your circumstances
Ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my area of interest to grasp computer course provided by your institute.
I read about this computer course from news papers advertisements. My area of interest to learn this course and I am very pleased to join this course but the main problem is lack of basic computer basic skills which I am unable to complete it due to financial problem. In this case, I can not enrol this course right now. Even I can not submit the support document regarding certificate which are related to mandatory requirement for this course.
I therefore request you to please consider my situation and make it as a special treatment to join this course. I am pretty much sure that I can manage this course without any trouble. Also, I will make you very proud in order to select me for this course.
Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to...
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Line 6, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rea of interest to learn this course and I am very pleased to join this course bu...
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Line 10, column 29, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... course. Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68518518519 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49478193433 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2250375343 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157095891888 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067175197589 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446228422882 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110397376781 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172049139347 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.