For Centuries, Important part of the education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills to be made as fourth skill to be added to the list.
To what extent do you agree?
Importance of the computers is increasing rapidly due to the ease of usage and wide range of educational data available. Traditional education system has not been changed drastically yet, however, some people argue that to gain diverse knowledge one should utilise the computers and it has to be added to the academics as equally important as other subjects. I believe, change is only the constant thing we would have. Hence, computer education should be made compulsory in education.
Books are considered as only source for the learnings till date. In schools, teachers are supposed/forced to teach from the books or already available documents. Theoretical ways are chosen over practical. For Instance, any mathematics rules are asked to learn without understanding of the background, basic rules are asked to learn rather. Though, its not compulsory and one could learn it by putting self efforts. Therefore, the use of old route could be modified with the involvement of the internet to opt for new ways of learnings.
In regards, with the introduction of the computers to the educational system would make tremendous change in the knowledge of teachers as well students, about any existing topic. The reason would be a variety of information present online. Learning experience would reach to the upper level as pupils would learn as deep as they want. Every individual has their own speed for adopting the data received, however, with the help computers anyone would be able to learn as per the pace. For instance, recently launched BYJU mobile application which explains every topic in details with basics covered. Students can go back and for the to understand if anything is not grasped.
Benefits of utilising internet with computers are always higher to obtain astronomical information available to study in depth, to communicate all over the world, to be updated since childhood about the events and competition happening around. To conclude, in my opinion, It is the crucial now to consider computer as primary education medium in the competing world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...of information present online. Learning experience would reach to the upper level as pupil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23123123123 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86446191789 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4516891676 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191883047483 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571787873757 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508353825122 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114838178871 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560951508824 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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