In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development ?
Shopping in malls or huge shopping centres has become incresingly popular among the buyers
resulting in closure of multiple small scale business and local shops. In my opinion, this trend is beneficial for the customers, but can only be considered as negative for local businesses.
There are many detrimental effects on regional shops as customers travel to large malls. Firstly, this results in reduced sales as shop keepers fail to entice the customers for shopping in their local shops. Consequently, it leads to closure of the shops, leaving them unemployed and in search of new business or a job. Secondly, they fall into prey of financial issues in supporting their family, ofter leading to debts. As a result, they start facing health issues due to increased stress level, such as cadiac problem and depression.
On the other hand, travelling to large shopping malls for purchasing has many benifits for the customers, for instance lucrative sales, centralised shopping and more comfort. This is because, most of the malls renders seasonal sales and reduced prices to attract the buyers. Also, shopping malls have differenct categories of shops at some palce, for instance, grocery, clothing and accessories. Further, it is more comfortable to shoop in air conditioned malls with multiple recreational areas and restaurants, to enhance the shopping experience.
In conclusion, although shopping in large shopping centres has bought multitude of problems for small local shops, often resulting in their closure. it has certainly enhanced the customer experience as they can shop in a more luxurious environment and get the products often at a reduced price.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hops, often resulting in their closure. it has certainly enhanced the customer exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37262357414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.806274273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3815849007 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338965317603 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127056908491 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090529334285 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189926481525 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438998436126 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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