Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Depression in this world is a tragic disease which is affecting many people in the world. To get rid of this irritable disease people have pets in their house so that they do not have a feeling of loneliness. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that those who do not take proper care of pets should not be allowed to keep them. In this essay, I shall provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
Pets cannot express their feeling by talking or showing anger. However, as a human being, we need to understand their feeling and should watch out them. Firstly, if a person cannot take good care of the domestic animal, he should avoid keeping them at his place. Taking care of the pets are not as tough as compared to a human being. Although, a pet has some needs like proper food, time to play with them and timely cleaning. It is also claimed that it is unfair to capture an animal in a house without treating them well.
On the other hand, most of the times pets are bought for killing boredom and not with the intention of taking proper care. For example, if a person buys parrots it is just for his entertainment he might not pay attention to his food requirement. This has led to the pets becoming more lonely when compared to their counterparts in the outside world.
While there are strong views on both sides of the case, my personal view is that if people are fond of keeping pets in their homes then they should pay attention to them. In another case, they should not be allowed to have pets with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43055555556 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22322026199 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5734171501 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433816009446 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144386761522 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100521100345 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258768795928 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534778194471 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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