Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoo, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecologically important.
Discuss both view.
Many people nowadays contend that keep animals in reserved areas is immorally injustice whilst some others would argue that zoo can bring not only entertainment but also ecological impacts to human life. It is an indisputable fact that zoo have both positive and negative influence on animals.
On the one hand, many people consider keeping animals in cages is wrong since that action has interfered animals’ freedom. It is undeniably true that, in order to establish zoos, a vast amount of living animals is unfortunately taken away from their families. In addition to losing natural habitat, these animals which are captured now, have to face another issue in health. For those animals having ill adaptation skill, it is certainly difficult to adjust to live in new house and thus, leads to series health problems. Sadly, these animals may suffer sickness or die. Taking seahorses, which are kept in aquarium, for example, they can only live up to approximately a year in this artificial environment.
Some people, on the other hand, strongly believe that it is entertainingly and ecologically beneficial to restrict animals in certain areas. Many scientists would argue that it is safer to observe living animals in zoos rather than in wild nature. Besides, capturing animals in zoos can possibly a best way to protect endangered animals from becoming extinct. For instance, a majority of giant pandas, which is now on the edge of extinction, is highly protected in Chinese zoos.
By way of conclusion, building artificial habitat for animals can have both advantages as well as disadvantages, which depends on the level of interference that human has on animals’ freedom. Fortunately, conventional zoos are now being replaced by national parks or safari parks which are considered as better methods to protect endangered animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...ure. Besides, capturing animals in zoos can possibly a best way to protect endangered animal...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... capturing animals in zoos can possibly a best way to protect endangered animals ...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...at for animals can have both advantages as well as disadvantages, which depends on the lev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29830508475 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90056211058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3494272634 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275093922529 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914223044214 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765892998573 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182335306914 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855069057016 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.