The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity.

The provided diagram depicts the way by which electricity is harnessed from water power. As illustrated, four stages are required to produce hydroelectric energy.

In the beginning of the process, water flow is collected in a reservoir and passed through an intake structure into a dam in order to be raised to create falling water. In the second stage, the falling water is regulated and flowed down through a sluice gate to a turbine. The pressure water flow creates, triggers the turbine to spin.
which activate a generator that is connected to it. altogether the rotation of turbine and generator, transformation of the potential water energy into hydroelectricity and the remaining water is released.
Finally, as the newly produced current’s voltage is
high, it is carried out by pylons to a substation transformer to reduce its voltage to 220-240 volts and after that it is supplied to different places.

In summary, it can be seen that the procedure begins with trapping water in the reservoir and ends with the transfer of the hydroelectric power to its various destination via transmission lines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...reates, triggers the turbine to spin. which activate a generator that is connected ...
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Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...os;s voltage is high, it is carried out by pylons to a substation transformer to...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2044198895 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07734310681 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3345386678 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169692300298 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716838403522 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530705761129 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073684281268 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560624515004 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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