Employers should give long holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree or disagree.
Holidays are necessary for every individual in order to reduce their stress and maintain energy level. It is commonly believed by many that employers should give longer leaves to motivate them to do their job. In my opinion, i personally believe that every employees should get enough leaves to spend time with there family and friends but at certain limit.
To begin with, every employed person wishes to get holidays to relax and spend time with their loved ones as long working hours deprives them to spend their time with family. It is also observed that people become more innovative and motivated to their jobs after taking breaks for some days. Holiday also gives an opportunity to travel and explore the beautiful places of the world.
However, it can be ignored that long leaves costs lots to employer business and to nation as well. Countries whose most of employed work force are involved in providing consultation and services to their clients of different countries would face huge economy loss with longer leaves. For example, Recently published article Indian state Hyderabad faced millions of loss in economy due to local election in state. Another aspect of taking long leaves is employees attention towards work. It is commonly believed that after returning more than week holidays, employees cannot concentrate on their work and they require more time to settle with their work.
In conclusion, employers should entertain their staff by providing them enough holidays required to maintain their interest in work but disadvantages of long holidays cannot be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20233463035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43177275896 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4829590911 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300424898264 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112016837735 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935832808146 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197701674141 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054375040342 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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