The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the renovation of ancient buildings cost a huge budget, it is better to construct new houses and roads from that fund. I totally disagree with that statement because protection of such buildings not only develops a sense of patriotism but also flourishes economy of the country.
The ancient monuments should be refurbished because it gives a sense of pride for citizens towards their nation. The old forts, monuments, and dwellings depict the history of a country and this raises love and respect not only towards the country but also among people. For example, there were a lot of riots among people in the Vatican City but after the Government restored the ancient buildings, people developed a sense of friendship and subsequently the conflict among citizens got reduced.
Another reason why the archaic buildings should be restored is the fact that it makes the country economically prosperous. These monuments are a great place for sight-seeing, enjoyment and it attracts a huge influx of not only internal but also foreign tourists. This, as a result, creates job opportunities for a number of people and thus uplifts the prosperity of the country. For instance, a recent report submitted by Nepal Tourism Board showed that tourism contributes about 90% of the budget of Nepal Government.
In conclusion, it is a good idea to restore the ancient buildings of the country as it not only develops love of the countrymen towards the country but also helps the nation to flourish economically. In future, I believe that many governments would preserve antique buildings despite the budget associated with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ps the nation to flourish economically. In future, I believe that many governments would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82509741253 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3639869111 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120850314701 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489001359487 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047378629106 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798150118335 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417482806192 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.