Today more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Traveling is an essential way of unwinding from these hectic lifestyles. With increasing accessibility and availability of modern means of communication and transportation there is an increase in travel to unknown and previously known as hard to reach destinations. These places could be with extreme conditions such as extremely hot and dry like Sahara desert or extremely cold like the Antarctic. While the rise in tourism at these places could be advantageous in the field of science or boosting local economy or else, it could also be potentially dangerous to the delicate ecological balance and rare species.
Income from tourism plays a vital part in some country’s economic growth like for Thailand or Dubai. So, with the rise in tourist visit in more and more unexplored interior locations ensures a direct upliftment of the indigenous communities financially. Statistics from the World Tourism Organization for the South Pole and the North Pole supports this claim. It provides numerical evidence that there is a 35 % growth in the purchasing capacity of the local settlements of these destinations after the introduction of the SNP adventure program which, facilitates trips to these difficult locations.
Additionally, these expeditions also provide with unique opportunity to collect scientific data helpful to understand the various phenomenon and uncover many historical mysteries. For instance exploration team from Japan in 2017 discovered three new reptile species that shares DNA with species in the Amazon Rainforest providing a key link to evolution. To sum up, these visits to untrodden places prove beneficial on multiple fronts including economy and science.
On the contrary, there have also been past instances where human interventions have been proven potentially threatening to the sensitive surroundings and ecological balance as well as some endangered species. Human race’s intriguing nature has been notoriously known to create disturbances in the existing environment under the veil of science. As per the recent results of a seal, counting project revealed that there is a substantial decrease in no of seals from the areas in the South Pole famous among the expeditors as they use them as a source of food and collect leather to take back. Another example is of the Caribbean island which has no human life form bus has its bio-diversity disturbed by human interaction. A stranded ship once waited in this island for few hours and this passed on the ants to this island which now is a danger to the existence of unique Croatian crabs found here. Therefore, it is clear that directly or indirectly humans are responsible for damage to the ecology.
Traveling to unknown and not so common locations can not only be adventurous but also essential in terms of uncovering scientific mysteries. These trips could be a major source of revenue for locals and provide knowledge. However, if care is not taken during these expeditions then it could lead to extremely dangerous situations for the natural balance. Hence such trips should be planned to maximize pros and minimize its cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 454, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Line 8, column 356, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2638.0 1615.20841683 163% => OK
No of words: 496.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3185483871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0081162553 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9328400446 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.619047619 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140164601508 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361203457733 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498542170147 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702676757087 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329329494994 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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