• Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.”
The arrival of the 21st century has brought many changes in our lives, in the way we work, in our daily activity, and the way we do business And it offers certain advantages, such as a higher standard of living and great technology advances. For this reason, I agree with the statement that life today is more comfortable and easier than it was when my grandparents were children. I will get into that in the following paragraphs.
First of all, advances in technology have widen the way we perceive and approach society. The development of the smartphone, for example, allow families and friends to stay in touch and communicate from very far locations, sometimes in another continent. And not only to communicate, but smartphones are very useful at work and while studying. You can download the UBER app and request a food delivery to your house or office, or maybe request a ride if you feel tired or don't want to drive. Definitely, your live has become easier than years before. We should be grateful for that.
Secondly, globalization has made our lives happier since we can travel abroad whenever and wherever we want. The flourish of the society in the new century has produce better communication in a way that didn't exist before. People can travel more, and not only for vacation purposes. Also to study, facilitating a broad spectrum and knowledge about political and environmental issues. Several years before this opportunity was only for the most fortunate. Additionally, friends can be visited and families can reunite with their relatives, specially during important festivities, things easy to accomplish because of modern transportation.
Finally, the standard of living has become higher. More people is able to study and work at the same time. With the progress of the society, more and more families can buy a new home, or a new car. Moreover, people in general can have greater expectations in life because they can save money and plan vacations ahead of time. This is very important if you have a family to support. What seems impossible or remote years before, today is more affordable and easy to accomplish.
All in all, for all those reasons mention above, I consider that life today is more easier, enjoyable and affordable than it was years before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ybe request a ride if you feel tired or dont want to drive. Definitely, your live ha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...duce better communication in a way that didnt exist before. People can travel more, a...
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Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...re, and not only for vacation purposes. Also to study, facilitating a broad spectrum...
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Line 8, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... society, more and more families can buy a new home, or a new car. Moreover, peop...
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Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...on above, I consider that life today is more easier, enjoyable and affordable than it was y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in general, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96614583333 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77004879048 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3447618062 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6818181818 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197543597529 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541971819741 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995070721369 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117348855375 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823712990483 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.