Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve others however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action? Discusse both views and give your opinion.
People have different view on how to manage environmental problems. While some believe this matter is too challenging for persons to handle, many others, included myself, think it is a responsibility not only of government, but also of citizens.
On the one hand, there are varieties of reasons why people think environmental problems are too substantial to solve for individuals. Firstly, managing some worldwide issues including global warming and ozone layer depletion is beyond the persons’ ability. According to this group, the only effective role to release these issues would be played by related organizations. As a second reason, environmental protection needs cultural domination in societies. In the other word, taking care of different parts of the environment including sees, mountains and forests should be an essential part of the culture. For example, if you go on a vacation to beaches in the north of my country, lots of rubbishes could be seen not only in see shores but also across the see.
In spite these arguments, I believe that there are several actions which could be done by individuals to handle this matter. The first, to preserve environment, persons should act like a community. I meant, persons can warn each other about the results of environmental harmful activities and prevent doing them. As an example, think about your friend who use personal car instead of public transportation. If you make him aware of hazardous consequence of air pollution, he would replace car by bus or bicycle. As a next action, citizens can prevent deforestation. Deforestation means clearing trees and plants without replanting. By these words, to stop this event, every person can plant a tree. For instance, families might consider on day in every year as a family planting day. In that day, all family members have to plant a tree or a flower in yard, garden or corner of the street.
All things considered, although it seen sensible for some people to believe that managing environmental problems is too tricky for humans, I think that people can do several things to overcome these matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13005780347 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95488395193 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2447498339 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266315605627 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664440157505 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747832456194 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165887992909 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487776487623 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.