In some countries, children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries, they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Children are the building blocks of every nation. Although, in some countries, rules should be obeyed by the children in terms of their behavioural attitude while other countries are not favouring the rules for the children as they think it is the way to broaden their mind.
Children are the asset of every nation because they are going to replace the current workforce in every field. So, every nation wants to make the best youth for the sake of betterment or development of their country by ensuring to regulate the rules by their youth. These rules and regulations abstain them to drinking, smoking, driving or using social media to a certain age, in this way, children restrict their precious time to do productive things and get away from the things that steal their study time.
Children are easily prone to the negative aspects of society like smoking, drinking, taking drugs, that are detrimental to their health and watch movies, that consume their a lot of time beside study. They can also build relationships and wasting their prime time for chatting or texting. Moreover, children are thinking that they can make their own crucial decision rather than consulting their elders or parents regarding their life and as if, they have no experience and their judgment is clouded, ruin their life.
All the laws are for the good sake of the children and I firmly believed that children should follow the rules so that the process of better civilization can be continued.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.948 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42363363568 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4988276284 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.444444444 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248872320634 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113075646715 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855182579934 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181830219972 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891359514797 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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