Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is evident that acclaimed sports stars are earning huge amounts of remuneration compared to other professionals who are engaged in equally essential services. While some people consider it as unjustifiable, others believe that it is reasonable and acceptable. Both the views will be discussed hereunder, and I would explain why I support the former view.
On the one hand, some people believe that professionals such as teachers, doctors and scientists are playing a very crucial role in the functioning of society just as or even more as sports professionals. For instance, a scientist engaged in the research to invent medicines for diseases such as AIDS is doing an excellent service to society. However, such people are not paid as high as sports professionals. Therefore, according to them, it is unfair to provide such an enormous amount of money to athletic persons, because their role is in no way superior to doctors, teachers, researchers and such other professionals as whose services are indispensable to society.
On the other hand, I would postulate that giving a more significant amount of money to sports stars is justifiable and reasonable. One reason is that sports professionals take extraordinary efforts and hardships to excel in their profession. That is, the amount of time and the effort they undertake to become a competent sports star is exemplary and incomparable. Moreover, they cannot maintain these skills and talents for long, and it cannot be considered as a lifelong profession. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar, once a leading cricketer of India, has retired from his career in his early 40s, which is nowhere near the retirement age of a typical professional. Had he not got a high remuneration during his career, life would have turned out miserable for the rest of his life, with no earnings whatsoever at present.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that successful sports professionals are earning higher remuneration compared to other professionals such as doctors and scientists. However, the higher amount of money paid to them is justifiable, while considering the efforts they take and the short span of time that they remain in their profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23512747875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10966361273 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6479009889 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236646433336 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877381621218 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664914368417 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157343715871 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554198337094 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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