Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
All around the world, there is a detrimental effect on plants and animals due to human activity. While some people believe that it is already late to counter it, others feel that there is still time to take necessary steps. In my opinion, some measures can be taken till we have time.
On the one hand, some people think that time has already passed to revert the consequences of human activities on plants and animals because warming of planet has become a global issue. In other words, ozone layer has been depleted to some extent and some part of icebergs has already melted resulting in rise of sea level. For example, recently a study suggested that there is significant amount of difference in sea levels due to tides than it was earlier in time. Therefore, the damage has been already done which cannot be ignored as some people think.
On the other hand, it is believed by many people that there is time to take preventive measures and I agree. Firstly, pollution level has not risen to severe category in some parts of the world so it can controlled by limiting the industrialization. Furthermore, encouraging people to put emphasis on greenery instead of concrete jungles. Take china, for instance, due to lack of greenery in some area they converted the pier of bridge into green pier which in result generates oxygen as equal to trees.
In conclusion, although people have opposite opinions, I think that there is always some time to do better and in this case, it can be done by motivating people to support greenery and control industrialization.
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- Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots What is your opinion 75
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'control'
Suggestion: control
...ry in some parts of the world so it can controlled by limiting the industrialization. Furt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68311797822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.950036419 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297506499554 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108918943918 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730782342904 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184817079731 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829811995614 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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