Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is a waste of time for children, they should only read educational books. What is your opinion?
Give your reasons and include your own or relative experience.
It is often argued by few parents that reading entertainment books is unproductive for children and therefore should read only educational books. As per my opinion, I disagree with this and believe that reading entertainment books has its own merits.
There are a lot of factors we can consider to support entertainment books not being waste of time. Firstly, as we all know that reading books is one hobby that is a must and should be possessed by everyone. It is a great way to learn about things around you and definitely helps you in personal and career development. Entertainment books make it even more interesting for the children to develop this as hobby. Secondly, nowadays every career requires creativity and imagination as part of their job. For example, an architect without creativity and imagination will not succeed in his career due to his nature of work. A doctor too requires some imagination and creativity in his field too. It will help him to connect and also explain the patients their sickness much easily.
Finally, reading entertainment books helps in family bonding. Parents can read their kids favorite books which can be mythological, fantasy or super heroes. This will help them in bonding with each other and lessen the communication gap. While i was kid, my mum use to read my favorite super hero books while putting me to sleep. This helped in creating comfort zone between me and mum. Today i share with her every detail of my life.
In conclusion, Children should read entertainment books because it will definitely help them in later stage of their life and also have positive influence on life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96739130435 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77303180996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7856894473 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246311215508 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813218343492 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939662345463 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180730070843 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117559990014 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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