Do you agree or disagree with following statement? "in the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future." use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
All member of each society have consensus of the fact that the job and the occupation which each person has been educated for it, has significant and crucial role in determining human being's future. It is become more dominant these days that newspapers job applying pages or internet employment advertisement has most viewed audience and become more popular. Massive and enormous effort for finding job are easily observed. Concerns evidenced in eyes of people who looking for jobs, as regard of obtain secure and successful future. As a new graduated person I believe that recognizing appropriate job for gaining profit life and future is easier in past than present time. Some of my explanation presented below.
In the past, the population of each country is not too much than now. Therefore, it is easy to find job and there was a lot of job vacancy, competition was not necessary for getting employed. As population increases open positions for suitable jobs get occupied. As contriving new sustainable job opportunity required financial support, time and innovative idea, opportunities become limited as population growth.
Technology has magnificent increase which create more task and an operator to do it. Diversity of jobs, consequent that people has some concerns to choose great job in compare of the past which limitation of types of job maid no difference to community to choose a certain job. Expectations of each community highly raised and society members did not satisfy to work with lower their social stratum. Graduated member of each city has cocpious growth. They want to make a significant change play an important and essential role in community, thus certain types of works are favorable for them. However, as mentioned before specific tasks are limited and have not much capacity to accommodate each volunteer.
Pleasant, acceptable and satisfying life required a job with certain income. Life cost raise up these days and people choosing their job by considering its income, as whole world deal with economic problems, finding profitable job is difficult.
Official and unofficial statistics indicate that range of unemployed people increase. In addition investigation among of graduated members of community brought the light to the fact that finding the job in the past is easier than today.
To sum up, the ease of achieving type of job to gain secure and successful job has been investigated and because of aforementioned reasons, for instance growth of population, increasing of communication expectation and technology, I confirm the claimed statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
...e, it is easy to find job and there was a lot of job vacancy, competition was not necessary ...
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Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...range of unemployed people increase. In addition investigation among of graduated member...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology, I confirm the claimed statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29854368932 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91054436462 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.494127916 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.952380952 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146071311722 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427824866431 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294230424681 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803934939484 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117660107329 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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