Restoration of old building in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Ancient buildings are exquisite creatures made by talented architectures which are superior their outer aesthetics as well as it enhance the beauty of its surroundings,high authority consume the quility of expenses to maintain how shall exquisite of it. However, if regime spend money on construct new homes which are conducive for every needy individual.In this essay I shall enunciate my perception before reaching conclusion.
To commence with, may historical buildings are fruitful for people due to it is offering multifaceted knowledge regarding older equipment as well as art and craft. Firstly, some of older buildings are in every part of the place and also attract tourism, which are useful for economic development of the nation. Secondly, if government spend money on modification of building which conducive for new generation, owing individual shall know about cultural heritage, how their elders also ancestors had dwell in prior time. For instance Raj Naval, Qutib Minor and Redfort are mesmerise creation, which help to increase the beauty of nation.
On the paradoxical side, in today's era we can seen impoverish, people live without shelters. May government consume money on construct new homes and apartments, which shall help to needy person apart from this, if tourist appeal towards ancient building additionally, they notice poverty, which are alleviate the image. Moreover, regime also spend money to build new memorise buildings ,which are attract tourism and also revels older culture, traditiona via, virastey khalsa in anandpur shaib that depicts the Sikh religion.
To conclude, I retriate that old buildings are conducive for new generation to give information about old culture tradition and equipments.In my perception government should consume money build new buildings, due to developing nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59498207885 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89666500598 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0575668606 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.1 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191616118401 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785827946797 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563036678709 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131564154425 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364989326346 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.