The only way to improve the safety on our own roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree
Road SAFETY IS A MAJOR CONCERN IN THIS WORLD, WHERE EVERYDAY THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE DIE ON ROAD BECAUSE OF ACCIDENTS. A harsh penalty is an alone path to enhance safety on our roads for riding culprit. In my opinion, the punishment is not the way to minimize the failure of roadways. Lack of awareness, improper skills of driving and various other factors are also responsible for this output. In this essay, the different reasons of safety failure on road will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, road accidents are very common causes of death rise in most of the developing and underdeveloped countries. Construction of roads with proper guidelines and signage on the streets are completely lacking in those countries. Use of low-quality material for road construction, which results in holes, spots on roads after a rainy season. All of this collectively, create an unsafe environment while driving and results in a rise in the number of incidents.
Secondly, Road safety education is also the prime factor, where authorities should work on it. Safety awareness in which classes and lectures should be provided in school education so that people will be aware while travelling on roads, weather using pedestrian or highway. Driving skills, issue of a license to trained professionals only. Authorities required to control the driving of licensed professionals by cross-checks of driving license of people while driving and purchasing a vehicle.
In conclusion, I disagree with the above mention statement that punishment can control the incidents on road and rise the safety. Various parameters are required to take into action to upgrade the safety on roads. Majorly, the safety education of roads, issuing of a license to trained persons only. All of these together can help in our society to minimize the risk of danger on roads.
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...while driving and purchasing a vehicle. In conclusion, I disagree with the above...
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... minimize the risk of danger on roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19867549669 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87233285669 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5045136277 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20685399317 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662459251584 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337886536294 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122219315839 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047981642675 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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