Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries , the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged. To what extend do you think it is positive or negative development.
In the modern age it is true that fossil fuels is a major source of energy, but some other source of energy better than fossil fuels. Presenting my view i would intend to explore my views in upcoming paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that now a days life is impossible by the fossil fuel. This could be because of it used an in every field. In the thermo power plant burnt the coal is higher level by the purpose of heat. The most evident would be that car's, motor vehicle are run by the help of fossil fuels. The further favourable aspect would be that in the field of railway electricity is produced by the help of diesel. The most visible would be that in agriculture field tractor is a basic need of every farmer and it run by help of fossil fuels. For instance, The recent survey findings have clearly indicated that there is common belief that 83 percent fossil fuels are used to produce the energy.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of there is a current distressing situation that in the fossil fuel present the carbon when it burn and unburnt carbon polluted the atmospheric air. The most unfeavourable quality might be that when the diesel combustion in the vehicle it produced the noise pollution. The most successful way to confront this would be to solar power and wind power is the environment friendly source of the energy. The government should be make the rules to used solar power. Rules must be followed by the people.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to use of alternative source of energy is encouraged, but in opinion solar power must be. encouraged by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71959459459 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48330574687 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503378378378 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5792394927 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190721648418 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617528338017 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864003981037 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146508428702 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660311689308 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.