In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individual and society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
Unemployment is the major concern for highly populated nations like India, China. Every year the number of graduates go on increasing but the same no of vacancies are not available for these graduates. It has been a serious concern for society as well as an individual. In this essay, the impact on a society and people will be discussed with an optimum solution in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, the unemployment is the main reason of poverty for the nation. People find the wrong ways to live life, such as criminal activities robbery, kidnapping and killing. Lack of job means lack of security, no money which forces an individual to look for an alternative to live which sometimes give rise to a terrorist. For the society with lack of jobs means lack of opportunity, unbalanced society in which most of the individuals are sick because of no right direction to live.
Secondly, the various steps can be taken to control such situations like the government needs to find different ways to provide jobs to the unemployed individual. The remaining unemployed youth should be supported by the government in terms of loans from banks with no interest, which will help them to do their own business. Moreover, incorporation of manufacturing industries/ units to support the employment of local people.
In conclusion, the jobless youth generation is the most accessible target in the society for criminal minded people, which can turn society into sick society and effects badly to an individual’s life. The government should take primitive measures to control such steps in the right way and punctually so that the balanced in the society will maintain with a healthy culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...graduates go on increasing but the same no of vacancies are not available for thes...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...ong ways to live life, such as criminal activities robbery, kidnapping and killing. Lack o...
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Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y will maintain with a healthy culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91994373723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5051148199 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185613245996 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680198637971 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337306965865 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114952771747 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124631386006 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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