Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depends on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?
There is constant debate regarding the reason behind’s people success, some people believe that people are successful because of their reason while other people is of opinion that if people has the will to succeed they will triumph regardless of their region of origin. This essay will discuss why region does not matter when it comes to the success.
Success is always achieved by the people who have a strong character and desire to be successful. Ability and determination of a person always overcomes the barrier of the region. For example, there are many indian cricketer who come rural region are successful solely because of their desire to be best and thrive in the field of profession. Therefore, based on these real life examples it is safe to say that region does not play essential part in one’s success.
Despite irrefutable real life example some people believe that region is main factor behind a person success. These people are delusional who do not want to accept the fact the region only paly fraction of part or no part in the success of a person. Having said that, region sometime may provide some necessary skill to be successful. For instance, a person from a region where agriculture is dominant may inherent the required skill to successful in that area.
In my opinion, region may provide necessary set of skill to be successful but at the end hard work and determination is more imperative when it comes to the use of those skill to become successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'cricketers'?
Suggestion: cricketers
...ion. For example, there are many indian cricketer who come rural region are successful so...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'those skills'?
Suggestion: this skill; those skills
... imperative when it comes to the use of those skill to become successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88188976378 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61455267145 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523622047244 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1854956137 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341227886605 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124803647563 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854334468052 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202096995312 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122049579416 0.0609392437508 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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