The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, globalization has played a crucial role in making a world a small place. There is constant debate between people when it comes to the effect of globalization, some people even fears that globalization will cause the culture to disappear. This essay will reflect up on the effects of globalization.
Being concern of culture disappearance because of the globalization is normal, since there are many south east Asian countries where influence of western culture is increasing solely because of globalization. In recent years, in many Asian countries the people are enjoying the western culture more than their own culture which is putting native culture in danger of extinction. For example, in Nepal people are celebrating Christmas more joyfully than their own native festivals. This inclination on other’s country culture is purely result of globalization.
Despite the increasing interaction between different cultures there is no threat of complete annihilation of the culture from the face of the earth because culture is dynamic and it will change and upgrades when it comes in contact with other cultures. Human beings are alive for many years, so there must have been many instances where different culture collided but culture has not totally disappeared.
To capitulate, even though globalization present threat on culture there is no way that culture will disappear given its dynamic nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44144144144 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95881148034 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1310773572 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255171506046 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110456807524 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521493043498 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159905685082 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04873943426 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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