In some countries married couples plan to have a baby a later stage age due to the demands of their professional career.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion.
There is a growing trend for married couples to have a baby late in their professional life. The main cause of this phenomenon can be directly attributed to the rising cost of living. Therefore, to ensure the best life for their kids they prefer to have them when they feel that they have achieved stability in their personal and professional life. In this essay, I am going list a few advantages and disadvantages for this approach and will also give my opinion.
Babies require special care and attention since they are extremely vulnerable to diseases due to their bodies weak defence mechanism. Apart from this, a newborn has to be breastfed on a regular basis. This is very crucial because any carelessness in this could result in a fatal outcome. Furthermore, the cost of education has increased exponentially. Therefore, it has become all the more important for parents to save enough money before bringing the child to this work. These things can only be accomplished when the job is secure and stable therefore it makes sense to have a baby a later stage in life.
However, it is scientifically proven that the fertility rate decreases in both men and women in their middle ages. So, conceiving a child becomes very difficult and also results in a depression in some cases. Furthermore, there is evidence that women body becomes weak to handle the demands of a normal delivery and this puts her life at grave risk while giving birth. Considering these things, delayed pregnancy is not a good option.
All in all, we can see that there are both advantages and disadvantages in having a child after securing the career. But in my opinion, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages in planning for a child at a later stage in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77884668323 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8741500925 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253609212149 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720969932707 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786979882687 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149449171534 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073192906805 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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