A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. Thank him/her for invitation, 2. Explain why you can not come, 3. Ask him/her about other times to visit.
Dear Gracy,
I am glad to receive your letter. Hope everything goes fine in your place. I am pleased to hear that you wish me to spend the holidays with you. I wish to be in the Netherlands and spend 2-3 weeks. It's been a long time we both met each other.
I would wish to come there by next month for vacation. I am quite occupied with few commitments next month. Firstly, I need to complete construction of home. Its now in final stage. I need to purchase materials related to building my terrace area. Secondly, I have booked holidays with family for marriage function. People are eagerly awaiting my presence in Kerala.
Shall I come on Mid April Next year? Summer would be the best time to view the natural beauty of nether lands. I would wish to travel to all locations with you and your family at peak summer. we eagerly wish to go to beach, boat ride and amusement park with your children.
Let me know if you agree with me. I am looking forward to enjoying the holidays with you. I would initiate to start Flight booking from now.
Best wishes,
Trace
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ith you and your family at peak summer. we eagerly wish to go to beach, boat ride ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47715736041 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32086858364 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.5724922688 44.8134815571 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.1 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.85 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219295297445 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593367004515 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623282010467 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136394537068 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411445700088 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.22 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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