Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether young people have plentiful amount of time to help the community or not. While some people believe that young boys today do not have enough time to help their community, I hold the opposite view. I completely think that teenagers have sufficient times to provide many services for the community.
To begin with, schools have a major part in young people lives. Teachers tend to put some classes for volunteer work, so students will have the time to help the community around the area. For example, in Japan, there is mandatory classes for volunteer work. Students have to go outside the school to provide some help for the community. Some of them help to clean the street and cut the tall trees that might fall on people and hurt them. Moreover, some students go to hospitals and help some cancer patients to take their medications.
In addition to school motivations, nowadays, parents tend to encourage their kids to help the community because they want them to learn how to be socialize in the world. For instance, when Steve Jobs was a teenager, his parents motivated him to do many volunteers works such as working in grocery store and help old people in some charity institutions to accomplish their tasks. These community services helped him to improve his communication skills and allowed him to be more social. Therefore, he was able to succeed in his life because of his parent’s motivation to do community services.
Last but not least, today, there are many public programs from governments that encourage young people to help their community. The government tend to do that in order to improve many skills for people at this age. For example, in my hometown Saudi Arabia, there are many volunteer programs for diabetic and cancer patients that supported by the government. Therefore, many individuals would be participating in public serving programs.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that today young people have the time to help the community. This is not only because they are encouraged to do that in their schools, but also their parents used to motivate them to help the community and there are many public programs support helping the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are mandatory classes'?
Suggestion: there are mandatory classes
...around the area. For example, in Japan, there is mandatory classes for volunteer work. Students have to go...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s motivation to do community services. Last but not least, today, there are man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99468085106 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6197227019 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476063829787 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3541798801 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204707678545 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768629793235 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600260909723 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141062635171 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529536226282 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.