You did a one day course at a local college, but you are unhappy about it.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,
- Details about the course
- Why you are unhappy
- Give some suggestions
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the one day crash course which I completed last week at your college.
It was a full day program designed on machine learning explaining and providing the possible uses as well as its benefits to the business.
Firstly, the seating arrangement was rudimentary and participants were uncomfortable throughout the program. Moreover, course has not explained the practical examples and success stories. Trainer during the course narrated the theory from presentation which actually was not contemporary according to the current market situations.
I believe, if the tutor has explained some real life scenarios of the machine learning , would have been more impacting. Additionally, it can be made more interactive with some task assignment during the course.
I hereby, request you to inspect about the complaints and rearrange one more class on the same so that it can be covered in a desired manner.
Yours Sincerely
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to explain'.
Suggestion: to explain
...ay program designed on machine learning explaining and providing the possible uses as well...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l life scenarios of the machine learning , would have been more impacting. Additio...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a desired manner" with adverb for "desired"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s on the same so that it can be covered in a desired manner. Yours Sincerely Navdeep
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Line 12, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ired manner. Yours Sincerely Navdeep
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45806451613 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04621427895 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6999848622 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217042137234 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709673520271 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787790502461 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105139417728 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902993987726 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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