How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly,Television is one of the entertaining things that are being used day by day and today the cost of television is decreasing and many people would be
affordable to buy televisions and it undoubtedly has played large roles in changing their lifestyle and it influences our life and televisions and movies have had big negative and positive impacts on them.
To begin with,Undoubtedly,people tend to invent new ways to create new television at present and today new movies are being published day by day and many people would love watching these movies such as english movies,indian movies and others.I would like to talk this from this experiences.My ancestor lived in a place where there were no televisions and movies available and they followed their own culture and rules and relegation.In contrast,people are now in the modern society in which their lifestyle is changing with the help of television and movies.For example,Many people used to wear clothes according to their own language and culture till television are used and today,many people change their lifestyle as what they saw through television and movies because many movies don't include our own culture.Today many people can't focus on study and work well and their time and money unnecessarily wasting on television and movies and has adversely impacted on them Furthermore,People learn something bad by watching television and movies.For example when there was a poor boy who used to watch movies more and learn new skills related to stealing,smoking and crime activities and start acting as what he watched on a television so that Televisions and movies has had big impacts on them negatively.
However,Televisions and movies has played big roles in changing many people's misconceptions and their life.i would like to talk this from my experiences.I currently in a place where there are many people who are superstitious.According to their superstition and religious beliefs,they weren't allowed to make toilets and they had to walk toward forests and it caused pollution and affected us negatively.When there was a new movies named" Ek Toilet Katha" which aims to spread awareness about toilets and its effects and they watched the movies and learned from the movies and they understood that it won't be wrong and they won't have any sins if toilets are being built.So that Movies and televisions has played big roles in widening our intellectual capacity and influencing us positively in many ways.
in conclusion,the advantages and disadvantages of watching television and movies can be seen easily and Televisions and cinemas have had big large negative and positive effects on human beings across the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 46.0 13.8261648746 333% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31162790698 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38488671678 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46976744186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 107.0 20.1344086022 531% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 426.247873895 48.9658058833 871% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 571.0 100.406767564 569% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 107.5 20.6045352989 522% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 5.45110844103 454% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234553359318 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151610730983 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508305314619 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135848439464 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459434141577 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.3 11.7677419355 487% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.59 58.1214874552 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 6.10430107527 375% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 46.2 10.1575268817 455% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.21 8.01818996416 152% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.8 10.0537634409 446% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.