; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I am John Abraham who got hired in your company during the recent interview held by the HR team of yours. I regret to write you that it will not be possible to join your company as per the mentioned date in the joining letter.
I have given a time period of one month to join the company at the time of interview by considering my notice period at the current organisation and as per that they have sent me the letter to join on the 5th of November. But I was hospitalised for the last 14 days and I have much work to complete before the relieve date. I believe that it is important to hand over the duty to the new joining on a good note and to co operate with him at least for two weeks.
I hope you would understand my point and I am sure that you know how irresponsible it would be otherwise. So I request you to grant me the permission to have one more week to join your team and I would be ready to take over responsibilities there before 12th of November. Please let me know if the HR team needs any proof such as doctor’s certificate to confirm this and I would highly appreciate if you could consider my suggestion.
Thanking you.
Yours Sincerely
123456
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- ; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including- your situation-Your problems-When you think you can start 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret writing'.
Suggestion: regret writing
...terview held by the HR team of yours. I regret to write you that it will not be possible to joi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mentioned date in the joining letter. I h...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I have given a time period of one month t...
^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and I have much work to complete before the relieve date. I believe that it is important to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erate with him at least for two weeks. I hope you would understand my point and...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Thanking you. Yours Sincerely 123456
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, at least, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29074889868 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58507367617 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5210886997 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270180140962 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12932698351 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100581612628 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163431947923 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889334260421 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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