Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed witht some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
- Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
- Explain why didn’t write earlier
- Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Mark and Steve,
Hope you are doing great. I have received the photos of our holiday you sent and I am extremely grateful to you for the wonderful time we had and also for the beautiful photographs.
After reaching back here, I was busy with some pending work at the office and straight away I went for a client meeting in Newyork. That is the reason why I could not write you earlier. But today while I checked the photographs, a lot of memories flashed in my mind and I was completely in a nostalgic mood for quite some time. Needless to say ,the sites we visited , the food and the adventure activities we did are always going to be cherished and I know you people also feel the same.
Anyway, I think you have to come and visit my place this winter as we discussed earlier. It is the perfect time here to explore and I will make sure you feel worth your time. Please schedule some days for the trip and let me know the plans. once again, thank you so much for the joyful vacation.
With love
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mark and Steve, ...
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Dear Mark and Steve, Hope you are doing great. I have receiv...
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... also for the beautiful photographs. After reaching back here, I was busy wit...
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Suggestion: ,
...ood for quite some time. Needless to say ,the sites we visited , the food and the ...
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Suggestion: ,
...e. Needless to say ,the sites we visited , the food and the adventure activities w...
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... we did are always going to be cherished and I know you people also feel the same...
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... I know you people also feel the same. Anyway, I think you have to c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...for the trip and let me know the plans. once again, thank you so much for the joyful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36979166667 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25696294053 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8291522624 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307324427324 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106007796964 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782889051406 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165834324459 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111962489451 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.