; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> Dear Sir,<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>I am Patric Edwards
writing from Boston . This letter is to get you notice an important issue
regarding the upcoming development activities of Boston Airport.<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>
I live with my family in North avenue street near to the Boston central
airport. As per the new reports , the airport authority has got the permission
to increase the number flights from the airport and for that they need to
develop more space. In order to do that, the authority has submitted an
application to the revenue department to get the area of Queens Public Park
next to the west side of the airport. But it is the only place for the local
families including mine to visit during our free time and if they get the
permission to take that land, we all will find it difficult to have another go
to place since there is nothing such in the locality to relax with our
families.<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> I would request you to have a study on this
matter and if you could realise the genuinity of the same, please try to
convince the airport authority and revenue to back away from their plan. If you
could publish a report on that in your newspaper, government might notice it
faster. I hope you would do the appropriate as soon as you can and your efforts
will be highly appreciated by all of us.<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Thanking you.<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Yours faithfully,<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>1236456 <o:p></o:p></b></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...='MsoNormal'> Dear Sir,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...I am Patric Edwards writing from Boston . This letter is to get you notice an imp...
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Line 15, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...central airport. As per the new reports , the airport authority has got the permi...
^^
Line 42, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...apos;MsoNormal'>Yours faithfully, ^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 937.175257732 257% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 9.36575875486 4.54256449028 206% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 29.2049746902 2.54303337028 1148% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 267.633392261 44.8134815571 597% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.857142857 76.5299724578 449% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 16.8248392259 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.29896907216 698% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0394969468905 0.216113520407 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057158382048 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719042290506 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412243922927 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746281086883 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 8.37731958763 491% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 70.7449484536 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 7.45979381443 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.66 8.71597938144 432% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.