You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter
- say where you think you left the papers
- explain why they are so important
- tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I forgot a few key documents at your hotel. I am absolutely sure that I left the documents at the conference hall on the first floor.
I attended the IBM annual conference meeting on the 4th of May. We had a discussion with our financial auditors at the conference hall on the first floor. I had presented a detailed financial data to our company auditors. However, I forgot to take the papers when I left. The documents are so important because they contain all the information about my company’s assets and liabilities. I am solely responsible for this data and any misuse, theft or loss of data would amount to the breach of trust the company has in me.
Could you search for my documents in the conference hall? I am sure you will find them very easily. I would appreciate it if you could give me a call as soon as you find the documents. I will come and collect the documents at a time convenient to you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... conference hall on the first floor. I attended the IBM annual conference meet...
^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...call as soon as you find the documents. I will come and collect the documents at ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cuments at a time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51322751323 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74194362591 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6155389384 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326409942544 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110496825707 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792071625688 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201890695732 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736064107698 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.