Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
incontrovertibly,in this 21st century environment problems are being proliferated at an alarming rate.it is enormous controversy among people that whether these issues should be mitigate by merely individuals or stringent laws ought to implemented by regime.i personally believe that government can make more contribution for the curtailment of obstacles and pollution of nature..
To start with people who say that an individual can make difference in these environment huddles they think that,vehicles are major cause of pollution in cities and rural areas also that is why people should give reduction to the usage of their private vehicles and they should adopt other modus operandi in their daily routine.for example,they can use car pooling in case they are working in same area with their nearby colleagues.as a result,they can revamp the pollution up to some extent
On the other hand,government is also responsible for cosmos protection they it is had better to make concrete laws such as they should put traffic lights in crowed areas,widening of roads,on the top of it,they should organise environment protection camps for the citizens.for example,few years back government raise a companion for afforestation which is extremely successful.consequently,environment burden is reduced than past years
In conclusion,it always has been a question in confront of people that whether government should conserve environment or it is individual's liability.i personally believe that individual can make difference by obeying laws and regulations but government should take steps on war footing for these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69421487603 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75464105041 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 121.0 20.2975951904 596% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 427.0 49.4020404114 864% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 689.0 106.682146367 646% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 121.0 20.7667163134 583% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 57.5 7.06120827912 814% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201412603756 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152790427016 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320052194764 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127216198014 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405918777334 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.9 13.0946893788 503% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -68.26 50.2224549098 -136% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.8 11.3001002004 467% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.91 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.34 8.58950901804 167% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.4 10.1190380762 498% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.