Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only government and large companies can make a difference.
to what extent do u agree or disagree?
Environment pollution became a major issue among all the world. it is believed that a single person can not do anything o protect environment,only government and large companies can do. i partially agree with this statement.
Individuals can save environment until some level. Because “the whole journey starts from a single step.” For example, In China, a person came forth to save a paper in a day. In this way, they saved one million trees in one day which can have a huge impact on the globe. this proves that each human being has the capacity to protect the motherland.
Moreover, large companies and factories are a main cause of pollution. Most of the factories emit so many gases and smokes which leads to air pollution. As well as large companies are using many un-biodegradable products. For illustration, If large companies stop using disposable plastic use something eco-friendly goods. it can be a great step towards saving the earth.
On the other hand, nobody can deny the role of government . pollution at large scale can be stopped by administration such as deforestation, green house, save water and reduce the use of fuel. government should take some serious actions to save the world. they should promote nature-friendly products. For instance, In Australia, nowadays government banned plastic bags .people are using their on bags and they have to pay for plastic bags so this step must reduce use of the plastic.
Everybody has the resonsibilities to preserve the earth at individual level . Govenment and big companies should use their power to encouter enviorment problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21755725191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00481468177 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7143173724 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9473684211 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7894736842 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220593488902 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700381346864 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933612014632 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132208563365 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991571791152 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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