It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is the best for both the individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree?
Getting married after or before the ’30s has always been a debatable issue, where some favoured to get married before 30s, while others are against it. I reckon that marrying after the thirties have better results for both the individual and society.
First and foremost reason behind my belief is that getting married late promotes understanding between couples; as both, the partners are mature enough to fathom the needs and desires of each other and this marriage will give them an adequate time to organize their future emphatically. For instance, a couple gets married at a later age have knowledge of handling family problems, which will provide them with a sense of contentment in life.
Another pertinent reason behind my opinion is financial security that individuals can only get marrying after the ’30s. Masses getting married in later years would not have to struggle in personal and professional lives, because of having stable sources of income through which exceptional nurture can be provided to their off-springs, as older parents are more experienced and more willing to take the responsibilities of bringing up a child.
Last but not least, youngsters destined to have more prosperous and experienced parents, can get better and more far-reaching training, and consequently contribute more to society. In every family unit, the couples may likewise receive the rewards of this pattern, as their first working years are not hindered by pregnancy and childcare, which in turn benefits the society and country to have a long and a productive workforce.
To conclude, late marriage is beneficial for both individual and society as people at that age have the maturity to deal with family commitments and finances that in return helps in making any society well developed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, likewise, may, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28472222222 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7706766873 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1071179434 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.111111111 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206873637908 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939268068622 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560387271453 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119140487902 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711805333698 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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