Big establishment are people's choice than local shops. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, a lot of big establishments around the city constructed. People prefer to go to this kind of places than going to small shops because there are many choices and prices are cheaper. However, this become a problem to small time shop owners.
In a bigger picture, this is a positive development for the economy of the city. Various job opportunities are available to people. Consumers will get a chance to choose a variety of products. Wider space is available for them to check items in different stores inside. One good point also is that supermarket and department stores are in one place. It is less hassle for people to look for what they want. Furthermore, a lot of business minded people can plan to invest on shops that they can rent inside the shopping centres.
However, for local shops, this establishment is an enormous competitor that they cannot compete with, because their resources are not enough to persuade consumers to choose them. In addition, local shops has limited products that cannot suffice the needs and wants of people. This become a dilemma to small shop owners because few people visits and buy at their stores. Consequently, in the long run, this will make them decide to close their small business. It will be hard for them to catch up with giant businessmen since they cannot afford to invest a big amount of money to build bigger store.
In conclusion, although large shopping centres will help the community especially with job opportunities and to consumers to choose different array of items. Local shops should still be visited and people should give them a chance to market their products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can rent inside the shopping centres. However, for local shops, this establish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89568345324 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60781443622 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0056704492 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179187428678 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542947432244 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489009407674 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111217088851 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057711017829 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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