Some people think that criminals should stay in prisons, however, other think that they need medical and psychological assistance.
What is your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is considered by some people that offenders should be kept in jails, while there are people who believe they should be provided medical and psychological aid. In my opinion, while I believe the criminal should have the privilege to obtain mental and psychological help, prison sentence must be defined based on the crime.
The primary reason behind any crime is the mental and emotional condition of a criminal while offending. In other words, psychological state of an offender is the key to encourage committing any crime, for instance, hate, anger, mental illness, influenced by someone, financial need, and even for fun. Offering to deal with such situation or mental condition in a rehabilitation centre would certainly improve massive difference in them. They should be thought of learning different skills, and behaviour to keep them away from criminal mentality. Nearly, 35% of the criminal's behaviour in India has been changed after providing medial can psychological assistance in jails, according to an article published by a well-known newspaper.
According to some people, on the other hand, all criminals should be imprisoned irrespective of the type of crime. However, it should be considered based on the offence. Firstly, there are many first time offenders who are charged with minor offences, such as over speeding, burglary or pick-pocketing. With such small crimes they should be given a small prison sentence or keep under strict observation of the police, they need not stay long in the prisons. Secondly, criminals who have committed severely dangerous crimes, for example, a murder or terrorism, should be punished with a life-long sentence in jail. They are a threat to society and nation, and such strict laws will deter people from such detrimental offences.
In conclusion, a prison sentence is essentially vital for criminals based on the type of crime, and providing medical and psychological assistance is equally important. The government should build more strict laws to discourage people from offending serious crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
... criminal mentality. Nearly, 35% of the criminals behaviour in India has been changed aft...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37654320988 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90734187759 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.924186593 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201216575134 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740924101781 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386153282114 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131778965938 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106202323233 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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