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similar jobs with you for your children?
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only playsports for fun, not in competition or contest. 58
- Should the parents give their child money to encourage them? 80
- Should students in school take part-time job ? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the statement: the professional athlete deserves high salary? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished? 70
Sentence: To give their child freedom when choosing a job is quiet positive compared force them follow the parence's orientation, which is so-called passive method.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to compared and force
Sentence: On the contrary, if all of the members work in the different field, for example, the mother work as a musician, the father is a doctor, then their child become a banker.
Description: The fragment child become a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense
Sentence: When someone got a headache, the doctor can deal with the problem; when they are stressed, the musician mother can play the music to help them; and the child are good at using their saving to invest.
Description: The fragment and the child is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Admittedly, the children can accept many suggestions from their parents if follow their job, but they can also find help from their teachers or coworkers which in turns foser their independence.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to if and follow
Sentence: All in all, I would strongly rommond the parents just free their force on the child when decide their working field.
Description: The word free is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to free
Description: The fragment when decide their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decide with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: When they comfront a problem, they are just able to percive it in the same way, as the effect of the single knowledge.
Error: percive Suggestion: perceive
Error: comfront Suggestion: confront
Sentence: All in all, I would strongly rommond the parents just free their force on the child when decide their working field.
Error: rommond Suggestion: ?
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 506 350
No. of Characters: 2338 1500
No. of Different Words: 252 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.621 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.27 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.36 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.267 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.432 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5