Technology
This last example provides the most hope in how
technology actually provides hope to the future
of humanity. By increasing our reliance on
technology, impossible goals can now be achieved.
Consider how the late 20th century witnessed the
complete elimination of smallpox. This disease had
ravaged the human race since prehistorical days,
and yet with the technology of vaccines, free
thinking humans dared to imagine a world free
of smallpox. Using technology, battle plans were
drawn out, and smallpox was systematically
targeted and eradicated.
Technology will always mark the human
experience, from the discovery of fire to the
implementation of nanotechnology. Given the
history of the human race, there will be no limit
to the number of problems, both new and old,
for us to tackle. There is no need to retreat to
a Luddite attitude to new things, but rather
embrace a hopeful posture to the possibilities
that technology provides for new avenues of
human imagination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 2235.4752809 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 442.535393258 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48407643312 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.55969084622 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08011674339 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 215.323595506 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 704.065955056 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9440032346 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213860590032 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869361310381 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892586410007 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638429987291 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131615713608 0.0667264976115 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.