Nowadays many business meetings and trainings are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?
With the rise in technological advancement, business meetings and training methoud are changing sharply with the passage of time. Most of the meetings and training are happening via Internet rather than face to face.This has both benefits and drawbacks and I will examine in my upcoming paragraphs.
The first step to understand, what are the advantages of training and business seminars on online mode?First and foremost benefit is that staff feel more comfortable and they properly managed their precious time. Similarly, they got rid of their all unnecessary Worries and tensions and staff increase their work efficiency. A best epitome of this is mothers who have busy schedule and love to do jobs they can get vast ammount of help from internet and make their career better. Likewise, online procedure are no much expensive and this will help in maintaining the ecnomy level of the company.
However, it is truly said, no rose without Thrones. There are also some drawbacks.Fistly, communication via Internet have lot of difficulties such as: flow of information,crash of connection. Moreover, people can't get good training from internet because people cannot apply the methoud properly which they are learn from Internet. Furthermore, in many countries people cannot afford high speed internet connection such as: kenya and South Africa. so due to this people from poor Nations prefer real offices rather than online mode.
Nevertheless, weighing both the pros and cons there some advantages for participating in meetings and seminars. but, apart from this, there are also some drawbacks which cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88566931618 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7755537304 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178456760106 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571041013717 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409084894046 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100726035638 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283659239636 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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