The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above demonstrates the number of mobile phones sold by differnet copanies from 2006 to 2012. nokia had the highest amount of sells from 2006 to 2011 untill it was overthroned by samsung in 2012. the number of mobile phones that samsung had sold , were gradually rising through the years. On the contrary number of phones sold by Motorella had decreased in general. Erikson reached its peak on 2007 and its sell numbers also went down afterwards but the decreasing in motorela's salements was more obviouse. at Apple started out in 2007 and had the smallest amount of sales untill 2010 till motorela went lower. eventhough it was still 200 milions sells behind its rivals ( nokia and samsung)by 2012 but it had had the highest growth rate among these brands. At the mean time the total amount of mobiles being bought seems to have been growing slightly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nokia
... differnet copanies from 2006 to 2012. nokia had the highest amount of sells from 20...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... it was overthroned by samsung in 2012. the number of mobile phones that samsung ha...
^^^
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r of mobile phones that samsung had sold , were gradually rising through the years...
^^
Line 1, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
... motorelas salements was more obviouse. at Apple started out in 2007 and had the s...
^^
Line 1, column 623, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eventhough
...s untill 2010 till motorela went lower. eventhough it was still 200 milions sells behind i...
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Line 1, column 682, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...till 200 milions sells behind its rivals nokia and samsungby 2012 but it had had ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in general, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29206176564 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.045407685 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126498774384 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729171686035 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821847181678 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126498774384 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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