Consumer good
As is illustrated by the bar charts, depicts the information about the consumer spending on six items in Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
Taking a quick glance, it is quite evident that Britain people spent more money than people other three countries and consumers spent most money on photographic film instead of 5 items.
To begin with, people of Britain spent just £170000 which the highest figure show on the chart but the lowest proportion was marked in Germany who were the lowest overall spenders. However, the figure for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy at nearly £160000. While, Franch people spent more that Italians on photographic film and CDs, Italians paid out more for personal stereos, tennis and perfumes. Whereas, the amount spent by Franch people on tennis racquets around £145000 was lowest figure show on the chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... same in both France and Italy at nearly £160000. While, Franch people spent more...
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... personal stereos, tennis and perfumes. Whereas, the amount spent by Franch people on t...
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... Franch people on tennis racquets around £145000 was lowest figure show on the ch...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...ople on tennis racquets around £145000 was lowest figure show on the chart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06944444444 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35403350984 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2285481927 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592261332331 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315828442434 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457922222769 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631656884868 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468924635855 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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