A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep disappointment with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, Master Chef, which was broadcasted a few weeks ago. It seems that your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner is only looking at the negative side of the program host, Mr. Gordon Ramsay.
Even though Ramsay sometimes shows his bad temper on the participants, I personally like him for his excellent culinary skills and being fair towards the contestants. He always tries to give honest and constructive feedback to aspiring chefs. Moreover, he offers good cooking suggestions to the viewers which I find very useful as I am a chef by profession.
I would like you to issue a stern warning to your reporter not to write such meaningless articles and request you to refrain from publishing such one-sided articles going forward.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Smithson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81813659367 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754838709677 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7142178267 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166928351803 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058987943272 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498044133345 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937536613025 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461446239655 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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