WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Medical advancements have made significant achievements. However, abortion remains a debatable topic. In many parts of the world, terminating a pregnancy is termed ‘ill legal’, while in other parts, it is only conceived as a matter of choice. In this essay, I would like to discuss the legit reasons for considering an abortion.
However, it is observed that developed nations are usually more accepting of an abortion, as the reasons could be life-threatening. Abortion is a consequence of conceiving, although a large number of factors play an important role to determine if an abortion is acceptable or not. Women often suggested terminating their pregnancy, if the fetus in the womb is declared still, or is unhealthy, or is deformed.
In addition, some nations believe that abortion is an act of cruelty and have abolished such practices. They believe that a life is conceived, and terminating a pregnancy for any reason is considered “killing”. For instances, in countries like India abortion is perceived as a taboo in society.
Rape victims are often forced to give birth against their will and wish. These women come from a very disturbed mental state and lack the ability to raise a child. On the other hand, ignorant individuals who fail to take precautions and continue to add to the population and are unable to afford basic living conditions.
Global issues such as safety for women and population control are taken seriously and a large number of people are warned against it. Preventive measure and precautions such as birth control pills and self-defense for women are being widely known throughout the world, compared to a decade ago. More people need to be educated about the pros and cons of an abortion and should be a legalized personal choice.
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| 2018-12-17 | Khushleen | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s a consequence of conceiving, although a large number of factors play an important role to deter...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ulation control are taken seriously and a large number of people are warned against it. Preventiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16780821918 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0820452781 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8926366695 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169787253176 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526701942062 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618459790676 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845603411889 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048038383964 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.