Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
There is a debate regarding understanding how effective a person can be in life by measuring how smart the person is. Although some people compare a person's success with the level of intelligence he carries, I believe that there are more efficient ways to calculate this effect and that is what this essay will discuss.
It is relevant to think that smart people tend to find ways to succeed in life such as developing an interest in things that remain not discovered or demand deep research and time of experimentation. This has been proved through the eras with inventors and scientists who discovered important things to the humankind. These people are often regarded by their efforts combined to the ability to think further and create new solutions for life and that is what makes them successful people, able to collect the fruits of their hard work in the future.
On the other hand, some researchers try to calculate children's QI levels in order to forecast possible future genius in mathematics and science. Although some children are revealed in a very early age as distinct from others due to the high level of intelligence and the skills developed that are not compatible to others of the same age, it does not ensure a successful life with an easy way to be followed.
To sum up, I believe that all the success a person can reach is due to the amount of effort applied to succeed and with persistence and hard work, everyone is able to achieve their desires and become glorious people in life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rson is. Although some people compare a persons success with the level of intelligence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76045627376 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64187697369 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2309415783 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237534479684 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886727384787 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443651272456 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123488486933 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392709799953 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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